Satisfaction (55-er)


She surveyed the house.Β The party was at 7. Nikhil would be home any time now. To check.

She was nervous. ‘Would he approve, satisfied? Perhaps, flash that dimpled smile?!’

The car honked.

‘Pushpa..’ It was him! She straighted herself. Eyes on the floor.

‘All set?’

She nodded.

‘Y E S ?’

…Ji Saheb…’

‘OK’, he grunted.

She retreated, dis-satisfied!

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Okay, its official. I’m obsessed. With Dentists and Cleaning Maids!!!

Brrrrrrrr…………

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42 thoughts on “Satisfaction (55-er)

  1. Wow a cool 55-er with a confession(by the author) at the end πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
    The house maid posts seem to be getting real popular these days, it’s my fourth read in 24 hours πŸ™‚

    Really? Send me the other links please… like I said, I’m obsessed πŸ™‚

  2. hehe… does that mean Pushpa has a crush on Nikhil?

    Wow, Pix, after all those comments, you are the only one who actually ‘analysed’ the story πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ And you’re right on the first half, she seems to have a crush on her boss πŸ˜‰

    Or does it mean Nikhil is a hard man to please when it comes to party decorations and cleanliness… πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€
    How much does he pay her?!! :mrgreen:

    I mean, she is a cleaning maid who wants to please her employer by her actual cleaning skills!!! Where can I get a maid like that?!!

    ok ok.. stopping now!!!! :mrgreen: πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

    Hehe, you can find a maid like that if you turn into a rich handsome dude πŸ˜‰

  3. Obsessed with maids – LOL !!!! But its so cute… πŸ™‚

    Yeah Uma, and after my previous post on ‘achieving a contract with a maid’, the maid Ben hasn’t even turned up!!!

  4. Hey, my name is Taylor and I got an incoming link from this site, but I can’t find it anywhere. Do you know why I might’ve gotten an incoming link from here? Thanks. (:

    Hi! I have no clue!! Blame it on WordPress πŸ™„ πŸ™„

  5. Lovely pals..unpredictable turn of events..:) crisp and nice..

    Thank you, and now you have to stop being Anonymous πŸ™‚

  6. I seriously have doubts on what you were in your previous birth !!! πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€

    Ha ha haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa….. Raaz Pichale Janam Ka…. yahoo πŸ™„

    1. Oh Swaram , Am so sorry… some crazy problem with my reader, your blog didn’t show up at all.. have to check out. Btw, quickly caught up with all your recent posts… khush??

  7. I so wish I could get a cleaning maid with a crush on me – that might get me a spic and span house πŸ˜‰

    And hey, I went to the dentist today and all I could think of, was your post πŸ™‚ But my dentist was a really nice lady πŸ™‚

    1. * Smitha: LOL!! Wear on a mask or something? Or perhaps get the hujband to do the overseeing when the maid is at work πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ Oh, and thanks for remembering me.. is that why I had hiccups today?!! But grrr… how can you get a nice dentist? Brrrrrrrrr… πŸ™„ :mrgreen:

      * Sanski: Hee hee I’m going to stick to that name hereafter πŸ˜‰ ROFL @ what you said πŸ™‚

    1. LOL, IHM…that was classic!

      I second that IHM πŸ™‚ Didn’t realise the similarities with the Shiney Ahuja story. Though I must admit, he would be the perfect cast for this story πŸ˜‰

  8. Maids, dentists and your blog..they all go hand-in-hand, right, Pals πŸ˜†

    Loved this 55-er!

    Totally, Deeps. They are an integral part of my life πŸ˜‰

  9. Hain jee!!??? This one only works because of the footnote Pal. Sorry but without the footnote its kind of hanging in there …..

    Oops.. this is just my obsession with maids, Ritu πŸ™‚ Sorry it didn’t work for u πŸ™„

  10. hahahahaha..whatta twist πŸ˜€

    rather, what an obsession! I am obsessed with weird stuff and killing my character/s in the fiction stories i write the way you are obsessed with maids and dentists..

    1. @ Nive: πŸ™‚

      @ Kanagu: Sigh!! I have to move on now πŸ™‚

      @ Neha: Gosh, killing characters? 😯 LOL, I have to catch up on all your earlier blog posts now πŸ™„ πŸ™„

  11. Hi,Pallavi-tks for ur comment on my blog…look fwd to ur visiting more often.
    —-
    Grt blog u have here…I smiled at this post….and,ur last remark-that u’re obsessed with dentists and cleaning maids…hahaha..both can give nightmares,I guess…:)Will be back to read some more.:)

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