I desisted breaking my siesta. Loud TV Soaps…Louder jazz!
But, it was ‘kaapi’ time.
Entered the hall…
Silence.
I stared, incoherent.
The photograph beamed at me.
The wife was long gone! My little ones, migrated.
It was Just me. An entire evening lay ahead!
I slumped onto the sofa. Grabbed the remote. Turned the volume to 50.
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(Please excuse the silly title).
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First! 😀
I loved it!!
I love your stories… 🙂 🙂
hugs!
Loneliness!
Pallu, love your fictions-short or long.
I agree with both sols and pixie love ur fiction they are simple but touching 🙂
hugs
A nice read indeed!
Gee so so gud Pallu 🙂 Echo Sols, Pix n Mon’s words 🙂
Thank you SO MUCH girls…if I have improved my writing even a wee bit, its because of friends like you!
Fantastic !! I loved this… !!
So much implied in so less words !!! Loved it !
loneliness in always diifficult to adjust too 😛 😛 good one!!!!!!!!!! liked it
btw, in my blog, you said that you wanted to see “guru sishyan” right???????/
all parts are uploaded 😛 😛
LOL !!! this happens in all homes !!! 😀 😀 😀 Good one 🙂
* Hitchy – Thank you 🙂
* Prash – Thank you…that’s the beauty of 55-ers, though many people are not particular fans of this genre of writing.
* OG – Exactly..Loneliness hits hard. Thanks for appreciating, and many more thanks for the Youtube links 🙂 This has got to be one of my all-time fav. movies!!
* Vimmu – Sorry, but did you actually find this funny? Or maybe it is, in a strange , ironical way!
Of course, that man has no more torture in his life !!! 😀 😀 😀 No wife, lovely life !!! 😀 😀 😀 😀
…and to think that you just got engaged!! Phew! Men!! MEN!!
yeah, same here!!!!!!!!! I just love this movie and rajni is just fantastic in this………
Wow! Pallu, you are too good ! You should be writing professionally!
The eeriness of being all alone,
waiting for at least the ring of the phone.
Lonliness hanging around the neck like a millstone
the sadness of solitude and to be all on your own.
Pal, well written.
* OG – Seriously! Must be Rajini’s all time super-duper-hits! I still remember literally ROFL at the one-liners!
* Smithu – Thanku so much, I wish your words were true, but I am miles and miles away from such dreams 🙂
* PRG – Its strange, how (like you mentioned), when we are alone, the phone seems to be a good enough companion, rather than a disturbance! Thank you!
Dont Say MEN !! say MAN… !! only vimmmuu… I love my wife..
LOL !!!!! ur wife should be reading this, na? 😀 😀 😀
…and your fiance is hopefully not 😉
Hitchy- Way to go! Proud of you 🙂
Vimmu bhai- learn..learn from Hitchy!
you calling vimmmuu also bhai ?????
pallu ??
Edited to say ‘Vimmu- learn..learn from Hitchy-bhai’ 😉 😉
Hi Pallavi, I found your blog very interesting. So I have an award for you :). Please do visit my blog to collect it.
Wow! Thank you, Dreamer!! Hopping over…hop..hop..hop..
I so know how this feels! 😦 fabulous piece of work, Pal!! You`re awesome at this 🙂
Loved these 55 words of loneliness…
* Mish – I understand…I really do! Thank you for appreciating!
* IHM – Thank you so much!
Your 55-ers are always a class apart :D….
short post, and even shorter sentences! 🙂 loved it!
* Dman – Thank you, you made my day 🙂
* Ash – (May I call u that?) Thank you very much!
That was so poignant a 55er,Pal. Loved it yet felt the pain somewhere in the heart.
You’ve such an engaging way of writing.Keep sharing like the way u do 🙂
Deeps – Thank you ever so much!
Loved it !!!! Kaapi time – so nice !!!! 🙂
pal: Thank you, thank you so much! And yes, I love my kaapi-time too 🙂
Lovely, Pals! I think it’s amazing that you have such a wonderful sense of empathy….not many people can do that…
Hey nice one…
Congrats on making the finals
Me: Thank you, Saurabh 🙂
Grinning at the switching of the Bhais in the comments Haha ha 🙂 😆 😆
Me: 😀 😀
LOL .. came bk n read this one again 😛
Gud luck Pals 🙂
Me: Thanks, Swaram. But I’m so pathetic at contests, I just never win anything! So not even going to make a post asking for votes this time!