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Holidays (rotten poem)


The whole world yet to see
We finally decide ‘romantic Italy’!

Once the papers are ready,
We queue at the Embassy

‘Oh! Sorry, we’re busy…
‘Book an appointment’, says she

We go away, crossly (So much for forced rhyme!)
But finally manage to see

The bespectacled lady
Who grants a visa to Italy!!
So we’re set, to fulfil a dream:
Venice, Florence, Rome

Though nothing really can seem,
Better than Home Sweet Home 🙂

14 replies on “Holidays (rotten poem)”

You have said as it is
what people like me really miss
the warmth of home sweet home
for I am a person on the roam.

(Hope you will not find any mistakes and have a wonderful vacation.)

Ritu- Thanks, we had a good time 🙂
Sol- Thanks, again, and no, this wasn’t fiction….thankfully.
Pix-Thanks for the holiday wishes..but the poem was rotten ;-))
Urmi- Thanks da, we had a nice time..will send u the pics link this time for sure 🙂
MM- Thank u buddy.
Ganga- Thanks, we had a great time…tiring, but really memorable.
PRG-Cool! That was really cool! No nit-picking from me this time 🙂
Yuva- I swear…finally…after talking abt it for 3 years, we have finally vacationed. Next stop is your place only 😉 provided you baby-sit our kutty-chatan.
Piper- It was awesome…will post another blog on it soon.
Barath- Thanks…and oof…that was indeed philosophical!

So, what do you think?