Caveman from a distant planet,
Gapes at ‘civilized’, turbulent Earth.
And chooses to remain, a noble savage!
(P.S: In case you are wondering why I wrote this: The fortnightly writing exercise on S&Co. was on Life on newly discovered planet, Creon. Since there were so many brilliant entries to the contest, I dared not compete with them, and decided to only write down the gist of my thoughts, and what better format, than Haiku !!)
4 replies on “Thoughts on another planet.”
Pallavi,,
That was really nice..especially the last line “Noble Savage” was dead on!
Thanks, Pappu. Sorry I didn’t reply eariler…quite barbaric of me 😉
Hi Pallavi, this would be so true! My sentiments exactly as you know 😉
A nice Haiku!
I know 🙂 Loved your poem!! And, thanks so much for taking the time to read this!