The brave little helper

2009 June 17

Once upon a time, there was a kind woman who had two children. She had a gentle face, but a face that was scarred by warts. The only way to remove them was a surgical process. She was very nervous, but her older, more responsible child talked her into getting it done.

When they reached the hospital, the child squeezed her hand and said ‘Don’t worry Mamma, you will be fine!’. The woman felt choked with emotion. Once inside the operation theatre, the good Doctor re-assured them that there was no reason to worry. The woman lay back on the cold, cushioned, couch. The girl stood by her, smiling and stroking her hair.

The Doctor readied a long shiny tube-like instrument and connected it to the power socket. When she turned it on, the tip glowed red, like the eye of a monster. It made a dull, whizzing sound. The brave little helper watched the Doctor with bated breath.

With one short and swift stroke, the Doctor brought the tube-like instrument close to the woman’s face, and roughly nudged the biggest wart. The woman shuddered involuntarily, not in pain, but in momentary shock. A few seconds later, the wart fell off. The spot now looked pink, and blood began to ooze out.

The Doctor said, ‘Give me that roll of cotton-wool’. No reply.

‘Quick, please!’ No reply again.

The good Doctor turned around. Only to receive the fainting not-so-little girl, who was falling slowly and steadily into her arms!

The Doctor revived the child by splashing cold water on her face. And then scoffed at her for having been so very ‘brave’!

The kind woman refused to remove any more warts and took her daughter home immediately. And lived happily ever after.

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(That brave little helper was, if you haven’t guessed yet, Mi Mi Mi!

And I wrote this (and tormented you), because today, I passed by the clinic where we had been to that eventful day, many years ago!)

28 Responses leave one →
  1. 2009 June 17

    Emotional, simple and profound.

  2. 2009 June 18

    Nice post!

    Pallavi – quite the story-teller! :)

  3. 2009 June 18

    You do have a way with words Pallu! :)
    So nicely written and so well told! :)

  4. 2009 June 18

    Awww…I love the way you write Pallavi :)

  5. 2009 June 18
    Solilo permalink

    Aww…Pallu, you brave big girl. :)

  6. 2009 June 18
    Quirky Indian permalink

    Seems like everyone is on a memory trip…. :-)

    So how old was the “older, more responsible child” then?

    Cheers,

    Quirky Indian

  7. 2009 June 18

    Reading the first few para I had guessed it could be you but then midway I was confused, nevertheless ‘brave little girl’ that was decades back :D
    Are still afraid of blood ?

  8. 2009 June 18
    Pal permalink

    @ Mini- You are a sweetheart…thanks for making my day.

    @ Roshmi- Thank you so much, for being so very generous :-)

    @ Pix & SMM- Thanks a lot, darlings, for being so supportive. What would I do without buddies like you!!

    @ Sol- Brave girl indeed…fainting at a half-drop of blood! He he!

    @ Quirky- Now you’re getting me into trouble..that responsible child was in her teens. Shucks!! Can I edit this to say the child was under 10 ?!

    @ Dman- Oh no! You guessed it right at the beginning?! I must re-write now. The sight of blood still makes me panicky. Its like, this stuff should be INSIDE and not OUTSIDE.

    And BTW, what do you mean ‘decades back’? How OLD do you think I am???????!!!!!!

  9. 2009 June 18

    Im sure there would have been some sign in front of the clinic when you passed by that read “Parents shouldnt bring in their kids, especially, those brave lill ones” !! Atta girl, you must have scared the wits out of the doc. He would have been confused whom to attend to first ;)

    • 2009 June 18
      Pal permalink

      Ha ha! The Doc was indeed shaken. If only she had been a Handsome He, the ‘falling in the arms’ bit would have been worth it! Sigh! Faint hopes there (pun unintended!).

  10. 2009 June 18

    Here is a brave little daughter
    who took to her heart all matter
    that hurt and pained her mater
    blood sure is thicker than water.

  11. 2009 June 18

    :P classic :P enjoyed the tale and the doctor’s heart attack :P

  12. 2009 June 19

    You are a brave girl, Pal. A simple tale told in a way that touches the heart.

    • 2009 June 19
      Pal permalink

      @ PRG – I always looked forward to your cute little verses… never fail to bring about a smile :-) Thank you!

      @ OG – Hey, its so good to see you here..thanks a lot for visiting! And am glad you enjoyed the tale :-)

      @ MM – Thank you so very much. You’re a darling!

  13. 2009 June 19

    :)

    P.S. You have received an award. Check out my latest post… to know more about it.

    • 2009 June 19
      Pal permalink

      Yay Roshmi! Thanks a ton. Am thrilled because this is the third time I am receiving this award! First from Dmanji, then Monika and now from you. Am I a blessed friend!!!! Thanks, girl!

  14. 2009 June 20

    Many congratulations!!! :)

  15. 2009 June 20

    You were brave. I chicken out of these things! I never go in with the kids. Blood undoes all my bravado!

    • 2009 June 20
      Pal permalink

      Ha ha! I didn’t know there would be blood, Ritu!!

  16. 2009 June 20

    I am amused. But everything said and done, I think the doctor shouldn’t have allowed you in the room in the first place. I think you were very brave. I would have fainted even before entering.

    • 2009 June 21
      Pal permalink

      I know…why didn’t that strike me before? The Doc should have not let me in at all! Thanks, Aparna!!

  17. 2009 June 21

    Not yet in Chennai….will be there most probably on 3rd July. Not decided. Will let u know….btw, cute post :)

    • 2009 June 21
      Pal permalink

      Oh, was hoping to meet u! But we are off on 4th!! Btw, thank you :-)

  18. 2009 June 22

    :) Loved the way you`ve narrated a tale from the past! :) what a beautiful read this was!

  19. 2009 June 22
    Pal permalink

    Thank you, dearest Mishy :-)

  20. 2009 June 24

    you brave brave girl :)
    (((hugs)))
    your helper was so brave too :)

    I cannot stand blood and gore…and injections are my nightmare :(

  21. 2009 July 8

    Awwww…. so sweet :) And really brave!

    • 2009 July 11
      Pal permalink

      Indi- He he, did you mean the Doc was my helper ? :-) Hey, btw, I like injections! Never was afraid of them…crazy me.

      Shail- Thankie so much :-) Sweet, may be. But brave? Ahem..!

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